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Promises, Promises

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Cinderella
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0 posted 07-29-99 03:46 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cinderella

Deciding to take a walk through the park
Remembering our time here in the dark.
Holding hands, looking into each others eyes
During the warm and humid month of July.

Why did you have to pick yourself up and move
Our friendship was just getting to improve.
Some other part of the world you desired
Couldn't you see - it was you I admired.

Knowing you left, never again to be seen
Who could I turn to, on whom could I lean.
Commitment I gave with my heart, oh so true
So why were you giving me a cold adieu...

Was there another lover in your life
Perhaps she would become your second wife.
My pride was hurt and to show you was wrong
For you were whistling a happy-go-lucky song.

Tomorrow will be another hot summer's day
And alone in my bed, as always there I lay
Dreaming of you will cause me to ache
Oh, well, there went another rat snake!



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1 posted 07-29-99 04:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

RAT SNAKE?! Such venom!




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Cinderella
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2 posted 07-29-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Thank you "deer" for the snake!

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Princess Lily
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3 posted 07-30-99 12:27 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

a great piece of work.Keep at it!~Lily

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Cinderella
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4 posted 07-30-99 11:25 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Princess Lily your comment was extremely appreciated.
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