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guiltborn Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 30South Dakota |
(not exactly a poem but something i wished to share just the same, its the opening paragraph to the book im writing) Somewhere between reality and time there lies a land where all may visit, where discrimination, prejudice,death and sickness have no powers. Fairies fly through mighty forests, huge dragons perch atop mountain peaks that stretch for miles and the sun only sets when told to. Heroes are forged out of the most unlikely souls, princesses are made out of the loneliest of ladies and ones face only adds to what is inside. Peace is what men fight for and war is overpowered by love. No one is ever too poor to travel there and all are welcome no matter their race, sex, religion or creed. However, no matter the power this realm may possess, it still depends on you to give it life. To find it, all you have to do is dream. ------------------ --------------------- "What dreams may come?" Guiltborn |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hess, I want the first copy of your book when it's done...well, the first is for you - I want the 2nd! Let's go to this place together....yours truly... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
This is perfect.I'd love to know the name so that as soon as it is done and out I can go buy it.~Lily ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is certainly not where I live....(sigh) Beautiful piece here Brandon....I love it just as much today when I read it, as I did the first time...still your fan. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
guiltborn, Put me down for a copy. I'm impressed. |
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