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culvram
New Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 8
Culver,OR USA

0 posted 1999-07-29 12:50 PM


I'm looking for answers,
to questions unknown.
I just know there's pain,
that cuts way past the bone.
It seems like a cancer,
that eats at the soul.
And tears out the hope,
that I'll ever be whole.
The people around me,
think they know the cure,
But don't understand,
that to me I'm impure.
It is said that,
we reap what we sow.
What I could have done,
I really don't know.

© Copyright 1999 culvram - All Rights Reserved
INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 1999-07-29 02:09 PM


Culvram,

I like your poem. I sent you an email with a few more persoanl comments thatn i wish to post here. Keep writing....welcome to the group.

INclan

Emmy
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY
2 posted 1999-07-29 06:37 PM


Keep up your search and someday these answers will appear. You write wonderfully, welcome to our family.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-07-30 11:57 PM


I really liked the feel of this one, welcome!
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