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Reflections of a Rainbow

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Mark R.
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Deep into the eyes of heaven I stare,
Singling out colors as they form in the air.
Reds, greens, blues come out of nowhere,
As water droplets are caught in the suns glare.

Frantically running towards this brilliant pleasure,
I desperately seek to find its hidden treasure.

There it lies shimmering before me,
Its radiant beauty spanning as far as I can
see.
The cool, wet mist caresses my face,
My arms extend, reaching for its grace.

"Can it be?! Am I finally here?"
Opening my heart as I wipe away a tear.
I thank the "Lord" as I look to the skies,
As I am reminded of nothing, but the beauty in your eyes......




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WhtDove
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Wow!!! Beautiful poem! I loved it!!!
Alwye
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We had an incredible rainbow over here in MN a couple days ago...but anyways, this is a truly beautiful piece!! Love it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Mark R.
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Thanks, "Rainbows", are beautiful, aren't they. I am fortunate enough to also see them in my special someones' eyes. In deed I am fortunate. Thanks again...
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nice imagery in this one.....I loved the last two lines!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
poetFemmeFatale
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~~Clapping so hard I can't type! ~~ BRAVO

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Nan
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Yep - they're truly awesome - Ever see a double rainbow???


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


RainbowGirl
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7 posted 08-14-99 08:06 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Beautiful....*sigh*..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


passing shadows
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just gorgeous!
LadyTom
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wonderful!
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