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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very good form! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Elvira: I have to say I really enjoyed the negativity of "will not accept" phrase being used in each stanza. It created a shelter for the positive words. Very interesting and creative use of expression. As always it is a pleasure to read your work. blueloon |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
elvira An interesting style. I read it a couple of times to get the flow and direction. Now, about that "20 years" comment. Does this mean you are an old woman???? Cranky and mean? Scary to all the little league ball players next door? I can see you now when the little boy comes to your door to retrieve his errant ball... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
rofl@pizza delivery guy |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
enjoyed it elvira..thanks for posting it. |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Very unique form... I liked it! Your poetry just gets better and better. This one was well enjoyed. Looking forward to perhaps more free verse; you have a very individual style it seems. A job well done. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ouch! I felt like every line was being punctuated with a stiff finger to the chest. Good effect. A job well done Lady E. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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