How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 untitled
 1 2
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

untitled(help)

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
culvram
New Member
since 07-28-99
Posts 8
Culver,OR USA


0 posted 07-29-99 02:21 AM       View Profile for culvram   Email culvram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for culvram

You feel trapped,
you can't get away.
Even the little things,
they set you off every day.
It is something,
that you have built up inside.
You haven't yet learned,
that from it, you can't hide.
The people around you,
they feel it too.
Give them a chance,
they care about you.
There are people who listen,
but can't seem to make sense.
Of your situation,
and why you're so tense.
Anger is worthless,
of this there's no doubt.
Just sit down and talk,
let your feelings come out.
Things will get better,
if you just talk them through.
You must always remember,
to your feelings be true.

------------------
RAM
© Copyright 1999 culvram - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 07-06-99
Posts 985
California


1 posted 07-29-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

nice message...too many people in this world are afraid to discuss their feelings

------------------
one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...07-20-69...devotion...
Master...apart...plain...chat?
Kiya
Junior Member
since 07-28-99
Posts 32
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.


2 posted 07-29-99 03:28 AM       View Profile for Kiya   Email Kiya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kiya's Home Page   View IP for Kiya

That was an excellent poem. Maybe you could use "Anger is Worthless". Hope that I have helped you.

------------------
Kiya Bowermaster

culvram will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> untitled Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors