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evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
i remember every moment of you i thought i could go on forever knowning you would be with me but forever was something you couldnt give me your touch fades in my mind but that touch is like no other i slowly slip from extrordinary finding solace in thought all my thoughts are of you i remember swimming in your hair drowning in your kiss i loved you more than i loved myself you loved you more than i loved myself you couldnt open up you wouldnt let me in we may never meet again but ill remember every moment of you |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
That was a very beautiful poem. You have a great talent. Very wonderfully written. ------------------ Kiya Bowermaster |
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