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evolution
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since 06-24-99
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ma, usa


0 posted 07-29-99 01:51 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

i remember every moment of you
i thought i could go on forever knowning you would be with me
but forever was something you couldnt give me
your touch fades in my mind
but that touch is like no other
i slowly slip from extrordinary
finding solace in thought
all my thoughts are of you
i remember swimming in your hair
drowning in your kiss
i loved you more than i loved myself
you loved you more than i loved myself
you couldnt open up
you wouldnt let me in
we may never meet again
but ill remember every moment of you
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Kiya
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since 07-28-99
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Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.


1 posted 07-29-99 03:24 AM       View Profile for Kiya   Email Kiya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kiya's Home Page   View IP for Kiya

That was a very beautiful poem. You have a great talent. Very wonderfully written.

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Kiya Bowermaster

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