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Open Poetry #1

desire

evolution
Junior Member

since 1999-06-24

Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-07-29 01:47 AM

I remember being younger
limitless possibilites
saturated in ambition
overflowing with potential
but procrastination is the thief of time
for greatness will not wait
time is unforgiving
yet that is all we have; time
what i make of that time is what I am
I can walk and take it all in
I can run and burn
I can grasp life and not wilt away
for greatness will not wait
neither will I

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

1 posted 1999-07-29 09:37 AM

food for thought.....thanks for sharing

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-07-30 05:04 AM

profoundly expressed

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Tu, cosi lontano, seppure ormai, cosi vicino. ~~~Andrea Bocelli~~~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-07-30 11:19 AM

Wonderful work on this one!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 1999-07-30 11:35 AM

I like - very much!

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

5 posted 1999-08-05 05:46 PM

I loved it. Wow, I had missed your writting.

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Mia

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

6 posted 1999-08-07 12:44 PM

Up on the top you go once more... hoping that others appreciate your poetry as much as I do... Keep posting because every time I get the chance to come here... you are one of the first authors I look for.

mia

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