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Tanzy
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 3
havelock, nc, usa

0 posted 1999-07-29 01:23 AM


Plateau

I can't find the path
to sadness or to happiness

Stuck on life's plateau
which direction should I go

I long for love and all its charms
but love the comfort of depression's arms

Somewhere in nothing's reach
emptiness sends out its leach

Desperate now with fustration
slice and feel pain's sensation

© Copyright 1999 Tanzy - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-29 01:36 AM


Nicely done. I feel the sentiment of this piece.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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