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Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-07-28 11:53 PM


my book
you have the look
of being well-thumbed, its true

somehow i am 5 stories up and
you, book
float between the upper air and me
rippling through the window

plenty of air here today
this afternoon well the shroud
of rain stopped, and everything
warmed
up
and floated, the way things do

which is why i am 5 stories up and
you, book
scatter your leaves on
the carpet of trees
below me.

© Copyright 1999 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-07-29 12:05 PM


Ok, this is nice, well written and very original!
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