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The Devil- TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!

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Seaangel
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since 07-27-99
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0 posted 07-28-99 11:10 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seaangel

You may have your uses
but you are no good to me:
only a fine plant can stand you:

"do not use on broken or irritated
skin"

you seep into the veins of me
through my irritations
when I am broken
you
saw me in half

you are only a magic-maker
from an eternal fire

the label "discontinue use if
burning sensation occurs"
is seamed onto your foot.
© Copyright 1999 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
nicnac8
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since 07-28-99
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New York, N.Y. USA


1 posted 07-28-99 11:17 PM       View Profile for nicnac8   Email nicnac8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nicnac8

Cool! that was very creative i liked it . keep Up the good work
Princess Lily
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since 07-13-99
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2 posted 07-29-99 12:29 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Very cute.I liked it!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

 
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