The Devil- TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!

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Open Poetry #1

The Devil- TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!

Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-07-28 11:10 PM

You may have your uses
but you are no good to me:
only a fine plant can stand you:

"do not use on broken or irritated
skin"

you seep into the veins of me
through my irritations
when I am broken
you
saw me in half

you are only a magic-maker
from an eternal fire

the label "discontinue use if
burning sensation occurs"
is seamed onto your foot.

nicnac8
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

1 posted 1999-07-28 11:17 PM

Cool! that was very creative i liked it . keep Up the good work

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

2 posted 1999-07-29 12:29 PM

Very cute.I liked it!

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