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Missing my Angel :)

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denboro
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Hi everyone,
Recently, I have had the wonderful pleasure of meeting an incredible woman online, and although I have
yet to meet her in person, she has touched my heart like no other . I wrote a couple of poems
relating to her, and I was just wondering what anyone out there thought of them? Please feel free to
offer any suggestions, comments, or other regarding the poems. Here they are..........

ANGELS

There comes a time in everyone's life,
when we look for something to ease our strife,
some say that angels don't exist,
but I for one find it hard to resist,
that for each and everyone of us,
there are angels who help us learn to trust,
that courage, faith, strength, and love,
comes in all shapes and forms, not just from above,
so I send you this poem from the bottom of my heart,
you've been my angel from the start.

MISSING YOU

I lie awake in bed each night,
wanting to hold you in my arms so tight,
your warmth and passion fills my soul,
look into my eyes and then you will know,
that with each kiss and beat of my heart,
our love will only grow stronger even while we are apart,
I know we have only just begun,
but my heart beats bright like the mid-day sun,
no words can express what I am feeling inside,
you fill my soul with such passion and pride,
and although tonight I can only hope and pray,
with God's help there will soon come a day,
where we share a bond of love so powerful and true,
but until then I can only dream of being with you.


Ok, don't be too harsh (lol). Thank you for your comments .

rookie poetry writer ,

Dennis
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