How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Reflection
 1 2
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Reflection

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
skya1
New Member
since 07-28-99
Posts 3
Euless,Tx,USA


0 posted 07-28-99 08:18 PM       View Profile for skya1   Email skya1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for skya1

The evening wore on
she wore less.
I've tried, to no avail, to
look away, but you
caught me looking all the
way in.
Is the brightness of your eyes
the intensity
of the fire within or is it the
reflection
of the fire in mine?



------------------
shadow eagle
© Copyright 1999 skya1 - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


1 posted 07-28-99 08:27 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow! Short but deep! Nice job.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 07-17-99
Posts 8273


2 posted 07-28-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is very, very nice. It's quite a task sometimes to express powerful imagery within a few lines and this is great!
skya1 will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Reflection Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors