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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 07-28-99 06:51 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I'm Here "(C)" Lost Dreamer 6/99

I'm here...
Cold, wet, and sad.
Your here...
In your Sunday best,
looking radiant,
and peaceful.

Why am I here?...
It's way to soon,
we never hugged good-bye.
Why are you here?...
You had so much
more to do,
so much love to share.

How do I carry on here...
Without your boosts
of confidence,
without your cheerful
greeting everyday,
without my cherished friend
to walk beside me.

Can you visit here?...
With angel wings
to hover next to me,
with a soft touch
to let me know your here,
with guidance
when I'm feeling lost.

I'm here...
Cold, wet tears
occupying my face.
The final good-bye,
the completion
of your circle of life.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
CSwtThng
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1 posted 07-28-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Beautiful work!!!!!!!
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 07-28-99 07:01 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

CSwtThng: Thank-You for your compliment.
Princess Lily
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3 posted 07-29-99 12:20 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Absolutely wonderful work.I love it!!!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


Poet deVine
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4 posted 07-29-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I think there should be a little icon next to poems that are going to make me cry! I find myself sitting here with tears on my cheeks!
Good job!
Balladeer
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5 posted 07-29-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Dreamer, each poem seems better that the one before. Nice work!
Severn
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6 posted 07-29-99 03:13 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is so beautiful. Tears.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 07-29-99 09:41 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Clmbb
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8 posted 07-29-99 09:46 AM       View Profile for Clmbb   Email Clmbb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clmbb's Home Page   View IP for Clmbb

No words to express the feelings that are invoked.....good job!!!
Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 07-29-99 09:10 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I am speechless, I Thank You all for your wonderful and kind comments.
pandora
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10 posted 07-30-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

Wonderful, LD! Especially this stanza:

"I'm here...
Cold, wet tears
occupying my face.
The final good-bye,
the completion
of your circle of life."

Whoa! This needs to be published in print... not just the net.... thanks for writing and sharing. You work is developing and changing and I am sooooo proud of you, m'friend!
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