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Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-07-28 06:51 PM

I'm Here "(C)" Lost Dreamer 6/99

I'm here...
Cold, wet, and sad.
Your here...
In your Sunday best,
looking radiant,
and peaceful.

Why am I here?...
It's way to soon,
we never hugged good-bye.
Why are you here?...
You had so much
more to do,
so much love to share.

How do I carry on here...
Without your boosts
of confidence,
without your cheerful
greeting everyday,
without my cherished friend
to walk beside me.

Can you visit here?...
With angel wings
to hover next to me,
with a soft touch
to let me know your here,
with guidance
when I'm feeling lost.

I'm here...
Cold, wet tears
occupying my face.
The final good-bye,
the completion
of your circle of life.

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

1 posted 1999-07-28 06:53 PM

Beautiful work!!!!!!!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 1999-07-28 07:01 PM

CSwtThng: Thank-You for your compliment.

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

3 posted 1999-07-29 12:20 PM

Absolutely wonderful work.I love it!!!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-07-29 12:23 PM

I think there should be a little icon next to poems that are going to make me cry! I find myself sitting here with tears on my cheeks!
Good job!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-07-29 12:44 PM

Dreamer, each poem seems better that the one before. Nice work!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-07-29 03:13 AM

This is so beautiful. Tears.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-07-29 09:41 AM

Absolutely beautiful!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Clmbb
Junior Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 18
Petersburg,Pa, USA

8 posted 1999-07-29 09:46 AM

No words to express the feelings that are invoked.....good job!!!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

9 posted 1999-07-29 09:10 PM

I am speechless, I Thank You all for your wonderful and kind comments.

pandora
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 184

10 posted 1999-07-30 11:59 PM

Wonderful, LD! Especially this stanza:

"I'm here...
Cold, wet tears
occupying my face.
The final good-bye,
the completion
of your circle of life."

Whoa! This needs to be published in print... not just the net.... thanks for writing and sharing. You work is developing and changing and I am sooooo proud of you, m'friend!

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