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tim123
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since 07-28-99
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Garden Grove, Ca


0 posted 07-28-99 06:17 PM       View Profile for tim123   Email tim123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tim123

This is a song I wrote a while back, but thought it might translate nicely to poetry... Let me know what you think. Be kind!

All the people in my life
have turned on me
And buried here deep in dispare
Anger and hatered are all I see

Pain grows deeper everyday
And it's killing my soul
And everyday my heart beats a little faster
from chasing disolving goals

So many times my cries
fell upon unkind ears
Running in circles, but moving in reverse
Now I give into my fears
© Copyright 1999 tim123 - All Rights Reserved
leelew
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since 07-10-99
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highmount,ny,usa


1 posted 07-28-99 09:53 PM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

Nicely done!Ease to follow,and heartfelt.
 
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