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leelew
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since 1999-07-10
Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-28 06:09 PM


Alone

Alone in the Darkness, I sit and I think
How it should be
How low did you sink
If you could see my face, my heart, my soul
Was tearing me apart your only goal

I wonder, in the dark
Why you were so blind.
So careless, Heartless
Unthinking of my mind.

Within is a sensual heart
Lying in waiting, Still yet unopened
The key is lost, Yet still it beats
But now I'm wandering alone, on the streets

Crying in the dark, Alone yet surrounded…
Memories confused, painful and jaded.
Feelings unending, and more I'm confounded
How could you do this, are you now sated?

Ah! But darkness has it’s own rewards.
Warmth, stillness, comfort and Creatures
Holding me, closely, Darkness my Lord
Touching me gently, seeing your features

Welcome Me Darkness, My Dark and True Lover
For you are my savior, sent from above
Here I shall wait, for you I'll atone
For it is my life, to be Alone.

This is a re-write of an earlier poem


[This message has been edited by leelew (edited 07-28-99).]

[This message has been edited by leelew (edited 08-03-99).]

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Phantom
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since 1999-08-03
Posts 18

1 posted 1999-08-03 05:33 AM


I can only hope your not wandering still.Nicely written.I liked this.
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