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The Idea

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culvram
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since 07-28-99
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0 posted 07-28-99 05:13 PM       View Profile for culvram   Email culvram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for culvram

The idea to complex for most to understand.
An inner growth,
a loss of command.
Not punishing words,
or an act of brute force.
Like the world of golf,
each has its own course.
It's not something you can hold.
In order to reach it,
you must step out in the cold.
To give up all you believe,
and be yourself,
willing to leave.
Don't get me wrong,
you don't have to agree.
But from you,
you have to be free.
Its what you look for,
not what's in sight.
But it's when you're not watching,
it will reach out and bite.
In order to listen,
you must first be able to hear.
Take the time to understand,
and all will be clear.

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RAM

[This message has been edited by culvram (edited 07-28-99).]
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elvira
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since 07-06-99
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1 posted 07-28-99 10:55 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

sounds like D/s to me...am i anywhere close or just making a fool of myself?...Welcome culvram

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