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r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
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glen easton wv

0 posted 1999-07-28 04:04 PM


i sit here in my chair.
i sit and wonder why?
i have theese terrible urges.
i think that i shall die.
my hands are really shaking
my shirt is ringing wet
this is a real addiction.
one i shant forget.
it really is a lust.
a lust thats filled
with need,and is
one that is so sinister.
sinister with greed.
what if they see me?
what ever will i say.
gheeze i didn't mean it.
to me it's only play.
the pressure is really building.
i think i'll go insane.
i then turn my computer on.
i am with yall,and my world
seems right again.

[This message has been edited by r. baker33 (edited 07-28-99).]

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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-07-28 04:05 PM


Nicely done, I like it very much!
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
2 posted 1999-07-28 04:27 PM


This is a fabulous confession Ronald...! We all know you're hooked - we are too ! It's ok....my life really isn't so pathetic that I have to come here 5 times a day or more !! I told Severn, I have to get my fix !! Everyone in here loves poetry, it's a passion almost as wonderful as sex - heck, it's better sometimes !! LOL That's what's so great about it...we're all in the same rehab....; ) See you tonight !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 1999-07-28 04:31 PM


Oh, I forgot to comment about your poem.....

I think it's fabulous - what a wonderful little jewel !
The first step is admitting you have a problem...now you've done that & I believe you're nearly healed !! I feel like church !!! Praise God!! LOL """"" In the sweet - Internet -
"""""we shall meet on that beautiful shore

( singing... )!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
4 posted 1999-07-28 05:03 PM


thanks for the nice replies. it makes me
feel good to get the feedback.

blueloon
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 161
NY
5 posted 1999-07-28 05:07 PM


I love it a lot, a lot, a lot!!! LOL. Made me giggle and think... I haven't hug my computer today! LOL
blueloon

leelew
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since 1999-07-10
Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa
6 posted 1999-07-28 05:31 PM


WOW! Nicely done.I'm glad someone else is addicted to the site too!
Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
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Minnesota
7 posted 1999-07-28 05:52 PM


LOL, great! I think it's really cute and fits me to a T!
Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
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USA
8 posted 1999-07-28 06:20 PM


This is cute.
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
9 posted 1999-07-28 07:54 PM


Better than sex, femfatale? Well, I don't know about that....

cute poem

r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
10 posted 1999-07-28 07:57 PM


thank you all so very much.i am just a
beginner.this really means alot to me.

r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
11 posted 1999-07-28 08:45 PM


back to the top whaaaa hoooooo.
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