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r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


0 posted 07-28-99 04:04 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

i sit here in my chair.
i sit and wonder why?
i have theese terrible urges.
i think that i shall die.
my hands are really shaking
my shirt is ringing wet
this is a real addiction.
one i shant forget.
it really is a lust.
a lust thats filled
with need,and is
one that is so sinister.
sinister with greed.
what if they see me?
what ever will i say.
gheeze i didn't mean it.
to me it's only play.
the pressure is really building.
i think i'll go insane.
i then turn my computer on.
i am with yall,and my world
seems right again.

[This message has been edited by r. baker33 (edited 07-28-99).]
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


1 posted 07-28-99 04:05 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Nicely done, I like it very much!
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


2 posted 07-28-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is a fabulous confession Ronald...! We all know you're hooked - we are too ! It's ok....my life really isn't so pathetic that I have to come here 5 times a day or more !! I told Severn, I have to get my fix !! Everyone in here loves poetry, it's a passion almost as wonderful as sex - heck, it's better sometimes !! LOL That's what's so great about it...we're all in the same rehab....; ) See you tonight !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


3 posted 07-28-99 04:31 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh, I forgot to comment about your poem.....

I think it's fabulous - what a wonderful little jewel !
The first step is admitting you have a problem...now you've done that & I believe you're nearly healed !! I feel like church !!! Praise God!! LOL """"" In the sweet - Internet -
"""""we shall meet on that beautiful shore

( singing... )!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


4 posted 07-28-99 05:03 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

thanks for the nice replies. it makes me
feel good to get the feedback.
blueloon
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since 07-07-99
Posts 166
NY


5 posted 07-28-99 05:07 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I love it a lot, a lot, a lot!!! LOL. Made me giggle and think... I haven't hug my computer today! LOL
blueloon
leelew
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since 07-10-99
Posts 90
highmount,ny,usa


6 posted 07-28-99 05:31 PM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

WOW! Nicely done.I'm glad someone else is addicted to the site too!
Elizabeth
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7 posted 07-28-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

LOL, great! I think it's really cute and fits me to a T!
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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8 posted 07-28-99 06:20 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is cute.
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
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9 posted 07-28-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Better than sex, femfatale? Well, I don't know about that....

cute poem
r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


10 posted 07-28-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

thank you all so very much.i am just a
beginner.this really means alot to me.
r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


11 posted 07-28-99 08:45 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

back to the top whaaaa hoooooo.
 
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