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deannamarie
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since 1999-07-26
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0 posted 1999-07-28 12:45 PM


As I laid to sleep last night
I knew it would be while
before I slept to dream
my face held a tiny smile

I can't deny it anymore
or admit it any less
I realized how I felt
and forgot about the rest

Sometimes I wonder
if maybe I am dreaming
when you're not here
it seems a memory

I wanted to tell you
I couldn't lie any longer
nor could I ever
love you any stronger

Too proud to tell the truth
too in love not to show it
I was so blind to you
how could I not know it?

I love you too much
can't you see
to let you go without a fight
you mean to much to me

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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-07-28 12:49 PM


Ah...I do remember a time when I once felt that way. You expressed the emotions very well. Thank you for sharing this.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-07-28 12:50 PM


It's very expressive.
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