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In and OutŠ

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Genea
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0 posted 07-28-99 12:32 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Genea

In and OutŠ 1999

I am in a jam.
I am out of shape.
Being in sync
Is out of sight.
Long ago
I was in the groove
Now out of my mind
In a jiffy
Out on the edge.
In the still of the night
Out of my reach
In deep water
I’m out of order.


[This message has been edited by Genea (edited 07-28-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
deannamarie
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1 posted 07-28-99 12:39 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

This is quick and witty. I kind of like it
Genea
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2 posted 07-28-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Thanks deannamarie for taking time to read.....glad u enjoyed it.

~G
WhtDove
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This was good. Boy we all get to feeling that way somedays don't we.

Thanks for your reply and God Bless ya
Genea
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4 posted 07-29-99 09:40 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

WhtDove, yes and sometimes more than we would like!

Thanks for taking time to read/comment.
 
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