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Open Poetry #1

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Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 12:32 PM

In and Out© 1999

I am in a jam.
I am out of shape.
Being in sync
Is out of sight.
Long ago
I was in the groove
Now out of my mind
In a jiffy
Out on the edge.
In the still of the night
Out of my reach
In deep water
I’m out of order.

[This message has been edited by Genea (edited 07-28-99).]

deannamarie
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
WI

1 posted 1999-07-28 12:39 PM

This is quick and witty. I kind of like it

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

2 posted 1999-07-28 05:29 PM

Thanks deannamarie for taking time to read.....glad u enjoyed it.

~G

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-07-28 06:29 PM

This was good. Boy we all get to feeling that way somedays don't we.

Thanks for your reply and God Bless ya

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

4 posted 1999-07-29 09:40 AM

WhtDove, yes and sometimes more than we would like!

Thanks for taking time to read/comment.

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