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A freeverse by a friend

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deannamarie
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0 posted 07-28-99 12:26 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

This was written by one of my friends. It's rather dark.

our souls are torn apart,
creating an everlasting torture
amongst my heart making it
bleed over our external bodies
burning the flesh making it
seem as another hellish torment
ripe along the seems of my
whole existence, never to see
the daylight of holiness, only
to see our downfall of our
bloodshed onto others, having
our angels of good and bad
pull at our limbs only to receive
the parts of us they don't want
or need, to drowned in the blood
tears they shed as they fall
to annihilation

James Luhman

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1 posted 07-28-99 06:33 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I don't quite know what to say about this one. It is sad to me that so many seem so depressed. But it is a good thing it comes out in poetry for that is good for the soul.
 
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