How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Darkness
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Darkness

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Sweet T
Member
since 06-14-99
Posts 65
mesa, arizona maricopa


0 posted 07-28-99 12:24 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

The darkness of confusion has covered up the
Eye
That sees the truth when the heart may
Lie
Searching desperately for the
Truth
When in all respect I am not a
Sleuth
How can a topic such as
Love
Take away the breath of a carrier
Dove
A boundary between love and
Hate
All predetermined by our sweet Lord's
Fate
We face many doors but which one is
Right
There is no signal, no guiding
Light
Eyes of caring, eyes of hurt all at one
Time
Place me alone
So tell me what did I do
Wrong
That has kept me lonely far too
Long
With no companion there by my
Side
Who'll stand beside me through life's long
Ride
Who won't hurt me like others
Before
Speak from the heart he'll know the
Score
Minds today have only one
Thought
Sleep in the sheets without getting
Caught
So when does the love truly
Begin
How can we stop losing and finally
Win
If you know please tell me I'm desperate you
See
The darkness of confusion has swept over
Me

Always looking for the perfect man, but my heart just hasn't found him!
© Copyright 1999 Sweet T - All Rights Reserved
blueloon
Member
since 07-07-99
Posts 166
NY


1 posted 07-28-99 05:02 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

In time Sweet T, a "perfect" will appear and your heart will feel clear. Stop looking and he will be there.
blueloon

P/S: I really liked this poem...To the top it goes.
leelew
Member
since 07-10-99
Posts 90
highmount,ny,usa


2 posted 07-28-99 05:34 PM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

Well done!! I loved it!
Sweet T
Member
since 06-14-99
Posts 65
mesa, arizona maricopa


3 posted 07-29-99 12:28 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

Thank you all for you inspiring words.
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


4 posted 07-29-99 05:11 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Keep faith, Sweet T! He's out there!! BTW, a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it!

------------------
*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Sweet T
Member
since 06-14-99
Posts 65
mesa, arizona maricopa


5 posted 07-29-99 06:11 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

Alwye.....
Thank you, I know he's out there, the trouble is finding him!
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Darkness Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors