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Evil One

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deannamarie
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0 posted 07-28-99 12:15 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

I am the evil one
that comes upon you in darkness
I take away your joy
and fill you with madness

The envy you feel
deep within your soul
I make you feel
like your never really whole

I mercilessly rake your heart
your mind and your reason
soon you no longer see the truth
but my work is never done

I love to work unknowingly
because you never see
you think it's someone else's fault
and yet it's really me

I am the evil one
this one you cannot see
I am the evil one
this thing you call jealousy
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Nicole
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1 posted 07-28-99 12:43 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Very well written! Jealousy is certainly an evil thing.
deannamarie
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2 posted 07-28-99 12:48 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

I try!
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3 posted 07-28-99 12:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Look out! It's the great green-eyed monster lurking behind you!
elvira
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4 posted 07-28-99 10:41 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

good poem...well, i must confess, i am a very jealous woman

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I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone ~~~Morrissey~~~
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5 posted 07-28-99 10:57 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very touching piece, thank you.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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deannamarie
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6 posted 07-29-99 08:42 AM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

Thank you? Well, you're welcome...
fjones
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7 posted 07-29-99 09:01 AM       View Profile for fjones   Email fjones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fjones

This is just the kind of poem I enjoy reading
It gives the reader some insight into living a better life.
Alwye
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8 posted 07-29-99 03:38 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Yes, I agree, jealousy is truly a destructive force. Nice job, I enjoyed this!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

LngJhnAg
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9 posted 07-29-99 03:46 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

deanna,

I'd say pretty things to you,
But then your work might look even better,
Than anything I try to do,
So I'll say, "Look, she mistyped a letter!"

lol -

A nice poem you wrote there - good subject matter. I do enjoy your poems, Lady.
Abdul Lateef
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10 posted 07-29-99 03:51 PM       View Profile for Abdul Lateef   Email Abdul Lateef   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abdul Lateef

I am new to this forum...and this was the first poem I have read and I find it to be very well versed. You have remarkable talent.

ma'salaam,
Abdul Lateef
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11 posted 07-29-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I just loved this poem! I think you have a great talent!
Andrew Scott
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12 posted 07-29-99 08:16 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Ah, yes. The green eyed one who likes to hang out at bars in the hopes that you'll beat the snot out of somebody for looking at your partner to long. Or around the water cooler at work for the time you trip somebody up to get that promotion. And at the auto showroom floor for when you decide to buy the $40K car because Bob down the street has one. Yah! I've seen him. If he comes across your way, squash 'em like the bug he is.

Oh, by the way; a fine bit of work here. Thanks for sharing
deannamarie
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13 posted 08-02-99 11:52 AM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

Hey I've been gone for a few days. Just want to thank you all for your replies.
 
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