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My Gentle Soul

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-28-99 10:46 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My fondest wish
and greatest fear
are one and the same.
One day you
will stand on your own.

Little sister,
I held you so near
and drank
all your shame.
I care too,
with this
heart of stone.

When first we met
you seemed a child
laughing and carefree.
Soon I found
you were less
and more.

I was dark
and a little wild,
spiteful and cocky.
I was bound
to help
you to soar.

I barely knew
what friendship was,
nervously unsure.
Still I knew
I wanted
you well.

Love works wonders,
indeed it does,
as it feels so pure.
For it blew out
my need
for Hell.


©1999 DreamEvil



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leelew
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1 posted 07-28-99 10:51 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

Soft and gentle, like the heart of the one it is written for.I love it!!
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2 posted 07-28-99 10:52 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent, Dream.
tori
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3 posted 07-28-99 11:00 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Such a lucky lady
Truly beautiful DE

Thinking!!!
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Nicole
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4 posted 07-28-99 01:09 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Truly touching. Thank you for sharing this!
Gentle Soul
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5 posted 07-28-99 02:56 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Oh DE... you have put tears in my eyes, you have no idea how much you have helped me.. *big hugs* I love ya brother.. and I always will..

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6 posted 07-28-99 03:17 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

This was truly beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

CSwtThng
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-28-99 09:18 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis a tribute to my Little Sister, who needed to hear such words.
IsabelleSkye
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8 posted 07-28-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Very nice, and I agree, it IS like the person it is written for
*hugs*
GREAT! (Tony the Tiger imitation)
I.Skye

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau
WhtDove
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Most excellent to see such brotherly love!!!
That is terrific. You have done a great job here, and most defenitly the words she needs to hear. God Bless Ya.
Alwye
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10 posted 07-28-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very sweet and touching...

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

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