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Gentle Soul
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0 posted 07-28-99 06:16 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Soul

With my hearts love doors open wide,
Giving all with nothing to hide.
I lay my love to those who "need",
But just to make, my love doors bleed.

I care for all, who for me?
are you out there? Can you see?
I am a girl, not a machine,
Just a big heart, just pure and clean.

many times I've been knocked down
My heart jabbed again I frown…
Never have I just turned my care off,
thinking Id find, my “friend” too soft

Im a hurt girl, deep within
tears streamin fast down my chin
many times my heart has been stabbed
now the hurts are carefully tabbed

Slowly my hearts love doors close
None in it, so none to doze
I know I will be set for pain
Plenty to lose.. but none to gain


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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 07-28-99 06:22 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is sad, it sounds like you have a kind and sweet heart. Don't close it up, and shut it off, what you have to offer will be rewarded in time.
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-28-99 06:31 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I knew you had the courage to write this, Little Sister. You've done very well indeed.

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WhtDove
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3 posted 07-28-99 08:46 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I agree, you have done a wonderful job!
Don't keep count, and don't close off your heart. There are those that will love you for who you are. Life just comes with pain sometimes. Chin up stand tall, You're a beautiful person with a beautiful heart.
Keep writing...
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 07-28-99 03:14 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thank you Guys, DE... I give you credit for helping me with the choppiness, I know it may not be perfect.. but Im learning eh? and also big brother, you are so special in my heart.. and I thank you for always listening to me when I need a shoulder to lean and cry on.. *hugs*
WhtDove, thank you for replying, I wasnt always so sad and depressing honest I wasnt.. and I have mostly happy moments.. but then there is still hurt, but I am fine nevertheless.. With God on my right, and my DarkAngel on the left, and all my other friends behind, the only way I can go is forward.. and I am heading there fast I honestly believe..

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leelew
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5 posted 07-28-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

Angel....you'll never be able to close those doors.There's to much love held within.....well done!
Gentle Soul
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6 posted 07-28-99 06:58 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

yes but sometimes I feel I would be better off to just close it, and never let anyone out thats in.. and no one new enter.. hehe
WhtDove
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7 posted 07-28-99 09:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Once again to the top you go, so through others your poetry may flow!
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