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ChickenLittle
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since 07-28-99
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0 posted 07-28-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for ChickenLittle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ChickenLittle

Loving from afar
Wishing on a star
Wishing that you'll be
Spending life with me
Wishing you were here
Wishing you were near
Feelings changing though
Turning cold as snow
Hurting me so bad
Making me so sad
Wishing i were dead
Turning life to lead
Burdening my heart
Unwilling to start
Loving another
Hating your lover
Regretting my life
Swimming in strife
Drowing soon to come
Wishing it were done
Waiting for the end
Breaking heart won't mend
Wanting you back now
Wishing i nkew how
Wishing you could feel
Suffering this real
Wishing that you could
Knowing that you should
Unforgiving pain
Never ending rain
Knowing i must die
Hoping you don't cry
Dying from inside Wanting suicide
hoping it is quick
Slicing with this bic
opening my vein
Releasing all the pain
Letting go my tears
Building up these years
Healing all my hurt
starting the dying
Ending the crying
Darkening to black
Coming never back
Wishing you were mine
Hoping that you're fine
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Blue
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1 posted 07-28-99 02:35 AM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

You are a very talented writer, and whoever you wrote this about must have been horrible to you. I love your poem and you should post more.
angel girl
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2 posted 07-28-99 02:52 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

great job chickenlittle! you have a great way of writing.
chicken
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3 posted 07-30-2003 01:16 PM       View Profile for chicken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chicken

why didi u stop writing if u still come on here all though i doubt u dont u should this poem  is gr8
 
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