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CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 124


0 posted 1999-07-28 01:49 AM


What's this relationship all about
You try so hard to shut me out

You try to hide your cheating eyes
But I know where your secret lies

The love of my life friend or foe
A seed of anger starts to grow

Our love is slowly dying
With no tears left for crying

You put me through such pain
How can love remain

Deep down in my broken heart
I see we're better off apart

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elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-28 04:02 AM


i liked the healthy ending...Welcome CSwtThng

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Tu, cosi lontano, seppure ormai, cosi vicino. ~~~Andrea Bocelli~~~

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-07-28 07:27 AM


Welcome to the family. You have some good thoughts here. I look forward to reading more.


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