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In memory of my little one...

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-28-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

A child so innocent & tender - so pure
So capable of growing - so capable of life...
Of laughter and smiles...of sorrow & tears...
Of loving and caring and dreaming and hoping...
This child's world so abruptly came to a standstill
This tiny soul was not yet meant to evolve.
This child I love...this child I lost....

A young man so warm and tender - yet strong
So capable of reaching any star he desires...
He knows of laughter & too many tears...
He's learning to love & dreams everyday...
Of what tomorrow may bring him - sunshine or rain
Chin held high for he has evolved & grows daily.
This young man I love...I will not lose twice.

My greatest loss and yet my biggest gain -
both came about on this 28th day of August...

***** In Memory of Laisha Denea...
......my little one.


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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angel girl
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within a whisper...


1 posted 07-28-99 03:23 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

great job, my mom has had 6 miscarries and it has caused a lot of pain for her. thanks. i think i'll share this with her.
tori
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2 posted 07-28-99 11:39 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

This touched a core fatale
A mothers love is core of our soul
I had much trouble getting both my son's in to this world... my last son was a twin I lost his sister, my only daughter in my fith month Thank God he was a fighter his first three years were rough ones!!
Being a parent of a child with special needs is a gift in many ways, it opens our eyes wider then ever before, and lightens are hearts in a way only thoes of us that have been touched can discribe

[This message has been edited by tori (edited 07-28-99).]
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 07-28-99 12:25 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you ladies for sharing your deeply sincere feelings & comments on this issue...it's certainly not the easiest to overcome when it happens...just knowing that you're not alone in a tragic loss makes it a little easier when asking "Why..."

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Severn
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4 posted 07-28-99 09:50 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

My dear, i just have to comment. You really have a lovely way with words, and it's often hard to find words that truly express the depth of loss - sometimes there's simply no words! I wrote a poem about the frustration of words - it's one of 3 in what I've titled Series 1; I just don't have it with me today, but look out for it, I'll put it on soon.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 07-28-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you Severn - you know how I value your thoughts & input....they truly mean alot...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Severn
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6 posted 07-28-99 11:43 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hi, it's me again! Just wanted to let you know I got your fantastic message, thankyou so much. Are you having a good day (night?) in your part of the world?!!!
Severn
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7 posted 07-29-99 12:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, sorry to disappoint(hehehe) but I'm female thru and thru and wrote Accidental Passing for a guy from my past. I'm actually in a relationship right now with the greatest guy in the world, but he doesn't write! (I can forgive that though...just!)
Severn is a name of a character in the novel I'm writing - does it sound masculine?
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