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Death - you win

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-28-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

A heart that used to beat has stopped -
A face that used to smile...does not.
Eyes that used to cry - are dried
Dreams that used to be have died !
Stars that used to shine are dim
Anger - bitterness now within -
For I have died...
For I have died...
For I have died...
and now you win..........


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet



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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 07-28-99 08:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Poet....again another fine piece. It speaks volumes in very few words. Sometimes they only win for a short while though...that anger, that bitterness, all of that shall too pass. Life goes on and so do we unless we choose no to. May God Bless
Ruth

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
guiltborn
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2 posted 07-28-99 10:07 AM       View Profile for guiltborn   Email guiltborn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit guiltborn's Home Page   View IP for guiltborn

i love your poetry, it seems to cut straight to the point. This poem cut straight to my heart because in a way, i relate very much to this poem.

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"What dreams may come?"

Guiltborn


Princess Lily
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since 07-13-99
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3 posted 07-29-99 12:47 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Keep up the great work!!~Lily

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Poet deVine
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4 posted 07-29-99 01:01 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I enjoyed this as I enjoy all your work! You do have a talent!
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