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Princess Lily
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0 posted 1999-07-27 11:24 PM


As time goes on
I'm sure you know
our own seperate ways
we will go
I love you my dear
And know you love me
But my dreams my love
are different than thee
I'll miss you so much
And I'll never forget
your oh so gentle touch

Remember dear that I love you
And always will
I hope you'll remember me, too
As we go our seperate ways
Please don't think I'm shrugging you off
I'm sorry to say this,
But I must drift aloft
I'm merely letting you know
that my dreams and your dreams
Will never combine
though I love you and you love me
Your dreams are so different than mine

love forever!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



© Copyright 1999 Princess Lily - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-27 11:30 PM


Truly wonderful...this is something I can really relate to. Keep up the great work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
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2 posted 1999-07-27 11:34 PM


tHANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE REPLY.


BY THE WAY......"THE RIVER,GARTH BROOKS"...A WONDERFUL SONG-LOVE IT!! ~MELI

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-07-27 11:40 PM


Welcome!! And yep, The River. My favorite song.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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4 posted 1999-07-28 08:23 AM


Nice detail payed in the writing of this piece. Good work!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
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5 posted 1999-07-28 12:37 PM


Thanx hoot.comments are greatly appreciated.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



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