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Cobra
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since 07-27-99
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0 posted 07-27-99 07:01 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Like a dove lost in the fog,
I couldn't see a thing.
But knowing that he's waiting there,
makes my lonely heart sing.

Cold winds can blow all that they can,
but it won't hold me back.
Knowing that his heart is mine,
will throw me back on track.

Mountains high and oceans deep,
dusty ground and snow from above.
All these fears I'll have to face,
to get back to my love.

Troubles, worries, and pains in my heart,
they'll put my spirit to the test.
But his prayers will keep me alive,
and I will do my best.

I'll struggle with my problems,
even hold the hand of death.
All of this, for my love,
for he takes away my breath.

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Cammie
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Magic Bunny
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since 07-26-99
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1 posted 07-27-99 08:44 PM       View Profile for Magic Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magic Bunny

Wow, what a gal! She must really love this guy if she'd risk it through all that. I don't think I'm that in love...
Just kidding sweetie!

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The Magical Rainbow Bunny
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 07-27-99 11:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

No doubt, that kind of love is rare nowadays! Great poem. Keep writing.
Princess Lily
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since 07-13-99
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3 posted 07-27-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT.VERY RARE LOVE YET POSITIVELY THE MOST WONDERFUL KIND OF LOVE EVER.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


 
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