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My keystroke Lover...( It might be YOU !! ) :)

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-27-99 04:29 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I have to say that 4 individuals inspired me to write this poem today...they are: E-mail Love by poet deVine....A stream of digits by blueloon....Cyber Seas by the infamous Ron....and Mike, who posted his version on E-mail Love by deVine...
The following was created for everyone in this room - for every poet, and every participant ...LOL


.........................My Keystroke Lover.................................

Such a safe Cyber sanctuary -
minds can fall in love "real time"
Such a beautiful encounter
when your keystrokes meet with mine...

I sit here as you type & take
the journey through your heart -
Your words become our foreplay on the screen -
it's quite like art.....

You share with me - I share with you
Unselfish with our time -
I read your lines of poetry...
How beautifully they rhyme....

I'm falling deep in love now -
Not because I see your face -
But because I know your soul inside
That sacred - secret place...

Funny - how the Net finds two -
Allows their screens to mesh...
Brings them to a room so intimate
Erotic minds & not the flesh...

Your rhymes they cause my heart to soar -
sometimes I laugh or sigh --
How stimulating words can be
In your world of verse - I fly !!

I may never know your name -
and may never see your face...
But you are my keystroke lover
With our poems.....we embrace....


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 07-27-99 04:46 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

I must confess I am confused,
By your cyber love confessions.
Now my fingers are feeling used,
And they gotten testosterone aggressions.

They used to be much softer, when
I posted here this morning.
Now they sense love in the cyber winds,
And they're hammering out this warning.

My whole body isn't mine to share,
With a cyber queen or princess.
But I if loaned my fingers, on a dare,
Would you make them type til senseless?


I liked your poem. It was erotic. I hope you find that person. :-)
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 07-27-99 05:21 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Well, I'm really not LOOKING for someone to torture into LOVE...however, flipping back through the pages of this forum earlier today, I noticed this topic kept coming up! I thought it would be fun to write something that we could probably all confess to experiencing at one time or another...And I must confess, some of you guys in here could "TALK" me into anything! LOL I've never seen so many smooth talking Romeos in one room before in my entire life!! I loved your addition to mine - I laughed and laughed and laughed & felt I'd violated you ! That absolutely made my day! Many thanks - you're very talented...I like your stuff...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

r. baker33
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3 posted 07-27-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

gosh i almost fell off my chair again!
there is one thing i want to say.
your good,very very good.it was like candy for my eyes.i was reading,and for just a moment it was like i have known you forever
thanks for the beautiful words.

p.s. at least you will know my name.
my given name is Richard.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 07-27-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Poet...I am totally in agreement with this one. It is amazing how words can touch hearts. Very nicely done!
Discovery and Wonder

Two souls...
Reaching out...
Find each other.

Two worlds...
Brought together...
By untold circumstances.

Amazing...
How words typed on a blank screen...
Can so touch ones heart.

And she canít help but wonder...
What things would be like...
If only in a different time and space.



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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 07-27-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hoot Owl, I really liked your addition...very nice. Thanks for sharing ! I think this poem has scared people away...LOL It's not gotten the response I thought it would, but it's one of my favorites....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Poet deVine
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6 posted 07-27-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I must confess, I'm quite besotted
by all the poets in this place
the way I leave from work each day
is like a drag car race.

Seeing who's been on and wrote
new poems that are zingers
finding out if someone replied
to something from my fingers!

Cyber-netically we connect
and are surprised to find a friend
and as such, I certainly know
just when this poem should end.

Now.



Loved this all! I'm so glad you were inspired! It's nice to know something I wrote made an impression on someone.



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-27-99).]
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 07-27-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Femme

I'm glad I was able to jest with you. I liked your poem, and I enjoyed my riposte. You write so beautifully.
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8 posted 07-27-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I think this poem is terrific. And accurate. We do form bonds here, through our poetry, that may never have been formed in life. Admiration is a form of love in my book. And we admire for the best reasons....by what is inside of the person, not looks, job title, wealth or status...but by the way they think, write and treat others. I would be happy to be your cyber-lover, PoetFemme Fatale, because I love what you do.
blueloon
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9 posted 07-27-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Thank you my dear PoetFemmme Fatale for the flattery that you have displayed. It is amazing how we all connect.
blueloon
poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 07-27-99 11:57 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Dearest Balladeer - Well, r.Baker33 fell out of his chair when he read my poem here - now it's my turn to fall out of MY chair ! I'm so appreciative of your comments and for your liking my works - rather flattered would be a better phrase ! Your poetry is superb, and I strive to be but a fraction of that....Thanks for taking the time to reassure me in what I do...I love your work, Balladeer, so we're already mental lovers.... So glad you see it as I do...so glad...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet



[This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 07-28-99).]
poetFemmeFatale
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11 posted 07-28-99 12:20 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you everyone for your comments on this piece !! I was really curious as to how it would go over -- seems to have stirred up many different emotions ! Really appreciate all the comments & criticism -- that helps me know what my readers like or don't like...I'm working on "brushing up" & expanding my project of a self -published book, and I really need to know what the people enjoy reading! Thanks a million !!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Elizabeth
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12 posted 07-28-99 12:46 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This one is GREAT! It's so sweet-by the way, who IS your "keystroke lover"???
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 07-28-99 04:16 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Now surely you're not asking a girl to kiss & tell ! I must admit, with all the Romeos - I have a favorite or two in here.....that's all I'm saying - my lips are sealed !! All your comments are greatly appreciated Elizabeth !!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

r. baker33
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14 posted 07-28-99 04:40 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

thanks for your reply. i really am hooked.
i guess we are all in the same boat.

p.s. my name is Richard not ronald ooops.
ha.ha.hee. hee.
r. baker33
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15 posted 07-28-99 04:48 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

maybe we should start a chapter of
poets annonymous.

Richard
blueloon
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16 posted 07-28-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Richard--I am afraid to admit but I think I need a program. Admiting you need help is the first step right?
blueloon
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17 posted 07-28-99 07:17 PM       View Profile for pusskatt   Email pusskatt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pusskatt

loved it!.... and met my husband that way too!
nicnac8
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18 posted 07-28-99 11:23 PM       View Profile for nicnac8   Email nicnac8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nicnac8

wow! that was great. i think uv made alot more people feel way more comfortable - i most certainly am.
thankx
r. baker33
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19 posted 07-29-99 02:09 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

hey its me again.i tried to get in adult
fourm,and see your newest, but didn't have
the pass word. how do ya like that 33 years
young,and still can't get in.anyway i am
glad its a hit.maybe someday i'll get to see
it.oh by the way don't worry about messin
up my name.my 13 year old son got tired of
saying hey yo Richard,he then shortened to
hey yodard hee. hee. that is how i got my
email name it's yodard33.now you know the rest of the story.good night.
poetFemmeFatale
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20 posted 08-13-99 11:20 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey, I think Elizabeth is still wondering who my "Cyber-Lover" is...I said I wouldn't tell, but I'm not good at keeping secrets.....I'm almost ready to spill it !!! Read this over again, and give me your guesses!!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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21 posted 08-13-99 11:42 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Gosh! Ah, er..hm...hope it's not me! Not that there's anything wrong with that! LOL

It's hard (no pun) not to have a few favorites here - but I think you should wait a few days before you reveal who it is..keep them on their toes.

pen of passion
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22 posted 08-14-99 12:53 AM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I can't believe what I've gotten myself into...all this flirting going on. Great poem.
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