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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas

0 posted 1999-07-27 12:32 PM


Far beyond the sky so blue
Is where all our dreams come true
Far beyond the stars that shine
Far beyond the hands of time...

If we'll keep our heads held high
Dream our dreams & learn to fly
Every wish we've made will be
Of fears & heartaches - we'll be FREE.....!


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
1 posted 1999-07-27 01:10 PM


thanks for the reply I really appreciated
it.just wanted to say that I read your last
two poems. beautiful thoughts,and wise
words.they were boath very good.

r. baker33
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
2 posted 1999-07-27 01:10 PM


thanks for the reply I really appreciated
it.just wanted to say that I read your last
two poems. beautiful thoughts,and wise
words.they were boath very good.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-07-27 07:51 PM


Far beyond this space and time
Far beyond this simple rhyme
In the recess of my mind
In quiet times I will find
Peace unburdened by the flow
Of life and all it's stresses so
And there will I be finally free
To be the person that is me

Laughs...sorry about that, sometimes I just have to go with the flow. Very nice poem anyway as you can see, it inspired me.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
4 posted 1999-07-27 08:27 PM


Isn't it great when we read something and it inspires us to create something of our own? That's what happened with me today : Read "My keystroke Lover", most don't like it, but I felt it turned out pretty darn good !!! LOL Thanks for your comments, AND your addition...I loved it !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


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