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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas

0 posted 1999-07-27 12:28 PM


"P ositive" is a way of thinking we should all posess...
O pen hearts & open minds give way to happiness...
S ongs escape of life & peace from many lips today...
I nstead of songs of broken dreams that crumble - fade away.
T ell me - do you often think that everything is
grand?
I s there hunger, fear or doubt in your sultry
land?
V isions of tomorrow bright should be within
your mind...
E very star you wish upon...you'll someday
surely find!


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-27 12:32 PM


you have my vote...i believe in Beck's cognitive approach

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...07-20-69...devotion...
Master...apart...plain...chat?


r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
2 posted 1999-07-27 01:20 PM


I like it.I liked the way it is laid out.
it flows,and if everyone thought like that
life would be alot nicer.keep going!

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
3 posted 1999-07-27 01:39 PM


I think this flows very nicely! And I agree...we all need to think positively!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 1999-07-27 01:51 PM


It's a great anagram(?) - well laid out, and with smooth flow from line to line. I enjoyed it, especially since I try to have a PMA.
Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 1999-07-27 02:29 PM


I enjoyed reading this POSITIVELY!
Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
6 posted 1999-07-27 02:54 PM


Wouldn't it be wondeful if everyone had
a positive attitude?Happy writing.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-07-27 07:32 PM


I LOVE IT!!!!! Very nice format and it works so well for you.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

denboro
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 12

8 posted 1999-07-27 07:52 PM


Hi,
I have read some of your poems and think they are wonderful, and if you are interested, I would love to read some of your erotic stuff? I too agree that we all have that side to us, and some are better at letting it out.

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
9 posted 1999-07-27 07:58 PM


I enjoyed this Positive is the way to go!
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
10 posted 1999-07-27 08:31 PM


Thanks everyone for your comments on this one -
I almost didn't post it because it's not one of my favorites, however it's gotten the most response! Denboro, I would love to share some of my Erotic poetry, but I've yet to figure out who I have to be to get in there ( the Adult Forum) I think that place is "CLASSIFIED"....LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Magic Bunny
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 18

11 posted 1999-07-27 08:53 PM


This poem was positively positive!

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The Magical Rainbow Bunny

denboro
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 12

12 posted 1999-07-27 11:56 PM


by all means, email me some . I happen to find your writing absolutely stimulating, and would love to see if our minds work alike . Take care.........keep up the great work.

Dennis

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