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Living with a Dream

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Ian Vernon
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From my childhood reverie I keep on wondering
When will I meet that girl who keep touching my dream.
Each morning I ask my self who is the girl in my happy memories.
Time passed by and I keep searching, I am living on a dream.

Grow old along with me, the best is yet to be,
Drink to me only with that pretty eyes and I will pledge with my life.
Or have a kiss but in the cup and I'll never look for wine
As real and true as the morning dew, I keep living on my dream.

Yes my love, you're like a white rose that newly sprung in June
You're like a melody that sweetly played in tune, as fair as you are
So deeply in love am I and I will love you till the oceans gone dry.
Yet I keep on searching since you live only in my dreams

I never thought that in this life of mine, a life of dreams
That I will meet you my love in the most unusual way
I used to think that it was just a dream, another good rumination
But I know I am now walking with my dreams, a living dream.

My life I offer you, my love I give you
I am yours as you are mine, my dream I share with you
You make my life complete, my days filled with greatness
You are not just a dream, We are living on that dream.
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Although it's filled with a dozen old clichés, you did a good job balancing it out with a couple new ones of your own.

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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?
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