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~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 07-27-99 11:30 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Each day you throw your arms around me
and you charge me with your love.
And it isnít really hard to know
what you are thinking of.
Your kisses are so sweet, my dear.
Your lips are so, so soft.
The way you love me is amazing
and my heart is thrown aloft.
Your dark and curly hair
is so inviting to the touch.
I never thought that I could love
just any one this much.
You instill the need in me
to be all that I can.
I know just what happy is
when I hold tight to your hand.
Our walks through the park
or even sitting quietly,
are truly the most wonderful,
heart-warming times for me.
Reading you my stories
or even simple verse,
going through the shopping mall
and emptying my purse,
loving all the things we do
is how I spend my time.
You are that special one for me;
loving you is so sublime.
And when the day is closing,
I kiss your forehead, little one.
Always and forever,
youíll be my darling, precious son.

©1999 ~onevoice~



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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 07-27-99 12:03 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very very nice -- surely not the ending I was anticipating, but that's good! I loved it !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Nicole
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2 posted 07-27-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Wonderfully descriptive! The feelings in this poem are so apparent. What lucky children you have (and what a lucky mom too!). I hope you save this one for him. Thank you for sharing.
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


3 posted 07-27-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I definitely will save this for him! I already printed it out and put it in his baby book! Thank you for your nice comments, both of you! Your praise is greatly appreciated!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Delores Hall
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4 posted 07-27-99 02:38 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

One Voice way to go.Beautiful.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-27-99 03:00 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Another reason to love you, one voice.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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6 posted 07-27-99 03:25 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

A beautiful tribute to your son. Nice twist. Thank you for sharing.
deannamarie
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7 posted 07-27-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

very unexpected ending and the sweetest thing I've read all day. Good job!
Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 07-27-99 07:16 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Truely delightful tribute to your son.
Truely delightful to my eyes, and soul.
Truely delightful in every sense.
~one voice~
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9 posted 07-27-99 08:42 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank You all... What can I say? Love my baby boy! hehehe

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Princess Lily
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10 posted 07-27-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

BEAUTIFUL!!i LOVED IT VERY MUCH!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


Alwye
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In the space between moments


11 posted 07-27-99 10:58 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So very beautiful, one voice. Not the ending I was expecting, but a beautiful one. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

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12 posted 07-27-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wow, I thought for sure it was about a lover! Nice way to throw in a surprise ending!
~one voice~
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13 posted 07-28-99 05:14 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Once again, thank you!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


 
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