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Loving You |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Each day you throw your arms around me and you charge me with your love. And it isn’t really hard to know what you are thinking of. Your kisses are so sweet, my dear. Your lips are so, so soft. The way you love me is amazing and my heart is thrown aloft. Your dark and curly hair is so inviting to the touch. I never thought that I could love just any one this much. You instill the need in me to be all that I can. I know just what happy is when I hold tight to your hand. Our walks through the park or even sitting quietly, are truly the most wonderful, heart-warming times for me. Reading you my stories or even simple verse, going through the shopping mall and emptying my purse, loving all the things we do is how I spend my time. You are that special one for me; loving you is so sublime. And when the day is closing, I kiss your forehead, little one. Always and forever, you’ll be my darling, precious son. ©1999 ~onevoice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very very nice -- surely not the ending I was anticipating, but that's good! I loved it ! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Wonderfully descriptive! The feelings in this poem are so apparent. What lucky children you have (and what a lucky mom too!). I hope you save this one for him. Thank you for sharing. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I definitely will save this for him! I already printed it out and put it in his baby book! Thank you for your nice comments, both of you! Your praise is greatly appreciated!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
One Voice way to go.Beautiful. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Another reason to love you, one voice. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A beautiful tribute to your son. Nice twist. Thank you for sharing. |
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deannamarie Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43WI |
very unexpected ending and the sweetest thing I've read all day. Good job! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Truely delightful tribute to your son. Truely delightful to my eyes, and soul. Truely delightful in every sense. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank You all... What can I say? Love my baby boy! hehehe ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
BEAUTIFUL!!i LOVED IT VERY MUCH!! ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So very beautiful, one voice. Not the ending I was expecting, but a beautiful one. Thank you for sharing this with us. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, I thought for sure it was about a lover! Nice way to throw in a surprise ending! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Once again, thank you! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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