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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 07-27-99 02:53 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Oh how the mournful wind cries through embittered heavens of gray,
And pearlized tears fall to frozen isles in a tragic array.
The iced over seas are long forgotten, emptied of vivid light,
A ghostly image, void of even the small comforts of night.

Souls lay entombed within dampened cellars of crumbling stone,
How horrific it is when a one must wade through sadness alone.
Not even pale beams of moonlight can pierce the shrouds of darkness,
It is a painfully hopeless sight, an image I shall never miss.

Infused with brilliantly shimmering waves of honest love,
My walls were shattered, letting bliss seep in from up above.
Wrapped within silken wings of pulsating silvery white,
With you I drifted through misty clouds in a spellbound flight.

My taunting demons are closed from your soft, feathery embrace,
And oh, how I tremble as with shaking fingers I caress your face.
Fate must think me a jewel to deliver an angel into my weary arms,
For that is truly what you are, my mystic guardian from harm.

Always I could gaze into the pools of your enchanting aqua eyes,
And each time that you smile I know for you I would gladly die.
Etched with in my eternal soul a simple phrase rings so true,
That my love is everlasting, and my love is forever with you.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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1 posted 07-27-99 03:03 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I liked it.. very well written. I think I will look to see what else you have posted.
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America the beautiful


2 posted 07-27-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Good job, Alwye! I like this one! Ahh, the beauty of true love...
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 07-27-99 05:02 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Yes, the beauty of true love...and thank you both very much for your comments!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Ruby dagger
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4 posted 08-02-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for Ruby dagger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ruby dagger

I love how descriptive you are. I love this poem!

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Luv ya

Kelly

No doubt, this will be a night to remember. -SHeDAISY
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5 posted 08-02-99 10:53 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Alwye, the time and effort you spent on this poem is obvious in the way it flows and the thoughts it contains. Very well done.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 08-02-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ruby Dagger- You know the sentiments behind this work, so you can see that it wasn't hard for me to be descripive. Thank you much, dearie.

Balladeer- Thank you so much for your compliments!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

 
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