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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Oh how the mournful wind cries through embittered heavens of gray, And pearlized tears fall to frozen isles in a tragic array. The iced over seas are long forgotten, emptied of vivid light, A ghostly image, void of even the small comforts of night. Souls lay entombed within dampened cellars of crumbling stone, How horrific it is when a one must wade through sadness alone. Not even pale beams of moonlight can pierce the shrouds of darkness, It is a painfully hopeless sight, an image I shall never miss. Infused with brilliantly shimmering waves of honest love, My walls were shattered, letting bliss seep in from up above. Wrapped within silken wings of pulsating silvery white, With you I drifted through misty clouds in a spellbound flight. My taunting demons are closed from your soft, feathery embrace, And oh, how I tremble as with shaking fingers I caress your face. Fate must think me a jewel to deliver an angel into my weary arms, For that is truly what you are, my mystic guardian from harm. Always I could gaze into the pools of your enchanting aqua eyes, And each time that you smile I know for you I would gladly die. Etched with in my eternal soul a simple phrase rings so true, That my love is everlasting, and my love is forever with you. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I liked it.. very well written. I think I will look to see what else you have posted.  |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good job, Alwye! I like this one! Ahh, the beauty of true love... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, the beauty of true love...and thank you both very much for your comments! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
I love how descriptive you are. I love this poem! ------------------ Luv ya Kelly No doubt, this will be a night to remember. -SHeDAISY |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alwye, the time and effort you spent on this poem is obvious in the way it flows and the thoughts it contains. Very well done. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ruby Dagger- You know the sentiments behind this work, so you can see that it wasn't hard for me to be descripive. Thank you much, dearie. Balladeer- Thank you so much for your compliments! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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