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A man's eyes...

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-27-99 02:02 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

..........Look deep into the eyes of a man.........
...........................See his soul.................................
...................Storms hidden within.........................
................................Raging......................................
..............Heal him - make him whole..................

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
r. baker33
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1 posted 07-27-99 02:50 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

your words are simply wonderful!
They capture my mind.so great as the whom
writes such sweet verses.
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 08-15-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sorry guys, I'd like to send this tiny little piece back through....it's not much, but hey ..?

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Poet deVine
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3 posted 08-15-99 12:04 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good no matter the size!

to center your poetry (if that's what you were going for - if not, skip this) before your first word type < then the word CENTER then > at the end of the poem do the opposite < then / CENTER then >


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 08-15-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Whoa, this looks like something I might write...eerie, Only it's ten times better


Thank you ms deVine, I've been wondering how to do that... now if you'll only tell me how to bold then I'll be happy!

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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel


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Terri
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5 posted 08-15-99 01:43 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Short & sweet....but packs a punch! I wonder, do men feel the same intensity when gazing into their lover's eyes? I'm truly curious about this.
deVine--thanks for the helpful hint


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RainbowGirl
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6 posted 08-15-99 05:14 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

This reminded me of the magic when that connection between eyes is made and all those tiny thoughts transmit themselves without a single word being spoken...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Mark R.
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7 posted 08-15-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.


Look into your lovers eyes....
See each and every desire,
Every dream....
Every wanton fantasy....

The challenge lies not in fulfilling these,
But rather in recognizing them...
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 08-16-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Fabulous addition, Mark....I loved it...how very powerful your few words....and very true. Thank you....***blowing kisses

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Delores Hall
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9 posted 08-16-99 12:25 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Short and to the point.Enjoyed the poem.
Sue
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10 posted 08-16-99 02:54 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

GREAT!
Nan
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11 posted 08-16-99 08:25 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is wonderful....
...It'd work for women too..
passing shadows
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12 posted 04-18-2004 01:38 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sensual and so true
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