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Love's gift

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Severn
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0 posted 07-27-99 01:37 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

Times are changing
slowly, I find
a heart beating out of
rhythm - beating
to your drum

A life of constant
questioning, your eyes
provide my answers, your
dreams cause me
to smile again

Faith lost, a hope
forgotten - I find
emerging in the slowness
of a stone heart
awakening to love

Your pulse, I feel in my
life, as it beats
freely in tune
to my song - this
music released

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'Only the shallow know themselves.' Oscar Wilde.
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 07-27-99 01:50 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Is this work yours? I hope so , because if it is, it just confirms what I feel about your poetry...it's absolutely fabulous!! I'd give anything to get inside your head for awhile....!!! LOL Keep on writing !!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Severn
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2 posted 07-27-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Thanks sweetie! It sure is - probably the happiest you've read from me! Thanks for your faith in me!!! (Don't think you'd want to get in my head though...!)
Severn
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3 posted 07-27-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Thanks sweetie! It sure is - probably the happiest you've read from me! Thanks for your faith in me!!! (Don't think you'd want to get in my head though...!)
Seaangel
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since 07-27-99
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4 posted 07-27-99 06:42 AM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Lovely, truly, madly, deeply. Have you been published? You can't hide your gift with words from the rest of the universe!
I love that you have captured a blossoming heart without resorting to cliches. Such strong language!
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


5 posted 07-27-99 08:24 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Nice job, I like it! Love, it does make us smile (sometimes).
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 07-27-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Severn, you & I are gonna have to talk....I've just flipped through 40-some odd pages in this forum, and have found so very little of your work ! Now I know you have it in you, so GET BUSY!! I'm waiting patiently to see more! I have to get my FIX for the day from you, and I'm hurting! LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 07-28-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Severn, I brought this one back up because I like it so much , and I wanted to be sure you read my message prior to this one...you weren't here last night, (I don't think) so I didn't want you to miss it...


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

 
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