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Love Affair

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blueloon
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0 posted 07-27-99 01:33 AM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for blueloon

Tonight we will meet,
But please be discreet!
Make sure no one is following you
down this very street.

I can see your lights.
My heart races with delight!
I look around no one is in sight.

"I'm sorry I have to lie."
As I wave to the window good-bye.
My heart has now begun to cry.

"Stop! I can not commit this crime."
I'm beginning to feel like slime.
I am no longer on cloud nine!

Up the fire escape to the top!
Through the window I drop.
And quietly into bed I flop.




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To give yourself keeps yourself still,
And you must live, drawn by your own sweet skill.
-shakespeare
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 07-27-99 01:47 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wowee...you made me feel like I needed to take a shower after reading this one! You are good at making the reader feel a part of the story!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

blueloon
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2 posted 07-27-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Thank you PoetFemmeFatale, for such kind words...no need to take a shower though!
blueloon
mom
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3 posted 07-28-99 01:20 AM       View Profile for mom   Email mom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mom

I love it!!...well said!
Cinderella
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4 posted 07-28-99 02:49 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

No guilt should you feel when having a wondrous love affair,
This may be a beautiful once in a lifetime chance that is so rare!
CSwtThng
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5 posted 07-28-99 03:21 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

This one made me sweat. Great job.

 
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