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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-27-99 12:56 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I hear voices...in the night...
none of them...belong to you...
Tell my heart...it isn't right...
to crumble softly...break in two.

Sing to me...a song so true...
of lovely things...of me & you...
Wipe away...my tears that fall...
help me stand...so brave & tall.

Stars that shine...so far away...
help me make...it thru the day...
Just like your kiss...upon my soul...
magically... you make me whole.

Without you here...I'm incomplete...
A ship asail...without a fleet...
A raging storm...without a sea...
A soul in love...so mode it be.



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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-30-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I send this back from page 40-something only because it reminds me of someone in this forum...someone I've grown very fond of...his softer side, anyway. (grin) Thank you.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 08-31-99 12:56 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah, come on guys! I'll PAY someone to comment on this one!?? Any takes? At least tell me that it's a sorry piece of attempt ! I used to really like this one - although I know it's not one of my best.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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3 posted 08-31-99 02:16 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You poor desperate thing! You can pay my student loan if you like!!! More Emily Dickinson comparisions must be stated here - I like!
Michael
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4 posted 08-31-99 06:06 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Femme,
You convey your feelings to the reader well here which to me is the true test of any poem. I truly share your sentiment.

Michael
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PFF - You don't have to pay me - I'll tell you I like it anyway - I LIKE IT!!!
( - Lobby for a raise for me, maybe?)...
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The Shores of Alone


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Searching in the archives, I found this gem, from Gen..Had to tell you, I liked it to, very much.
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