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Your dream...

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-27-99 12:43 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You are so close...
i can feel you breathe -
yet so far away...
i just can't believe -
when i'm near you...
that you're not mine -
i can't touch your lips...
please give me some time -
to reach down inside...
and be everything -
that you've ever wanted...
i'll become your dream.


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-15-99 12:08 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Not even 1 tiny reply on this pathetic thing? At least tell me how bad it sucks?? Let's try this again....heh heh.

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 08-15-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

ok here PFF, I'm weeping ALL over my keyboard. It amazes me how much emotion you can project from so few words!
(And it DIDN'T suck!)

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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel
Severn
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3 posted 08-15-99 05:19 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What do ya mean it sucks?! Gee - I have to work really hard to get replies sometimes!!!
There's so many of us on here...I quite liked this actually - it reminds me of my poem 'Accidental Passing' - in content. (Sucks...tch tch, don't put your work down!)
Michael
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4 posted 08-15-99 05:23 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

DREAM LOVER

Dream lover,
You come to me.
You fill the need,
You plant the seed.
Passion arises,
Slowly incises.
Sensations burn,
Souls cry and yearn.
A fleshly tingle,
Two bodies, single.
Fountains flow,
Faces glow.
In arms clinched tight,
Embraced by night.
Impeached by dawn,
I wake, you're gone.


Michael
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 08-15-99 12:08 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm flattered you WROTE THIS FOR ME !??? Right? Right? Very sensual piece....very nice.... Thanks for all the very uplifting comments!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 08-16-99 10:12 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, PoetFemmeFatale, I do believe that we do truly think very much alike..you express this so beautifuly...I've been there..(but now I'm "his dream", or so he says). Wonderful job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
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7 posted 08-16-99 10:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You grab the collar of my emotions and pull me right against your face every time.
Haskins
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8 posted 08-16-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for Haskins   Email Haskins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Haskins's Home Page   View IP for Haskins

The quiet desperation of the soul and skin. A subtle ode to the interdependency of the human spirit. A vulnerable longing and a thirst unquenchable.

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William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 08-16-99 10:36 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you so much everybody - you guys are too kind....I love each & every one of you ! ~~smooches

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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