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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-27-99 12:39 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Come away with me now to that land far away -
Where the sun always shines -
Where the night is always day...
Where your kiss becomes the sun -
Your embrace a gentle breeze...
That blows and sways my heart -
Like the winds across the seas.

Your touch becomes the castle -
In my land of fantasy...
The air of sultry shores of love -
the air of history...
You'll be my knight in armor,
and I'll be your princess fair -
Together we will become one -
the theme of love we'll share.......


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
Delores Hall
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1 posted 07-27-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Would it be nice if every one could have a
knight in shining armor?
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 08-15-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

A what in shining what ?? What's that?? **chuckle** Yeah, when naked men fall from the sky, as I say!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Christopher
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3 posted 08-15-99 01:29 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

This is nice PFF, but I'd rather spend a "knight" in your...
I'll stop now, before I get in trouble... (I think it's time for me to get my *%@ into the adult forum!

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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel


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Nan
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4 posted 08-15-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Here we have one of the gems I missed while I was teaching this summer - I'm so glad it surfaced - It's just beautiful!!...
Sue
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5 posted 08-15-99 10:55 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

We can all dream, and you do it so beautifully.
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 08-15-99 12:15 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thanks Nan - your comment is so genuine...I wrote one for a teacher of mine in high school many years back (MANY) and it's in here, quite a ways back, but I think you'd like it.....I'm not sure if you read it the first time it went through.....Look it up if you want....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Balladeer
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7 posted 08-15-99 01:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

There are SO MANY lines I could use her but, aside from the fact I would be banned for life, I wouldn't use them anyway because no flippant comment should detract from the absolute beauty of this poem. Beautiful.
Alwye
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8 posted 08-16-99 12:31 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, so very beautiful poetFemmeFatale. I loved the entire theme, the flow, everything...

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

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poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 08-16-99 12:32 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Balladeer, your comments are so welcome...they mean so much coming from someone as great as thou art !! Much appreciated, believe me....***curtsies*** "You sure were a beautiful baby......" (singing to you)..

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 08-16-99 09:15 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Alwye, also a big thanks to you!! I tell everyone in here, you & I are so much alike I think....our thoughts and opinions...I read your poems & comments, and you always remind me of me!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 08-16-99 09:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To PFF,
The dreams of dreams fly high
and seldom carry the cargo why,
So why not fly.

Loved your poem.
juanita
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12 posted 08-16-99 04:51 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

PFF, thank you for this beautiful, beautiful
poem.
LngJhnAg
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13 posted 08-16-99 04:55 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Femme - err, ahh... yanno, I AM just a weak man. You DID know that didn't you? This is a terrific poem, with well-thought out direction and flow.

As for the Knight in shining armor - on summer days this armor I wear gets really really hot
graham
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14 posted 08-16-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for graham   Email graham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for graham

yep...Like it!! :-)
Severn
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15 posted 08-16-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, I haven't had my two cents worth yet! My gosh - this encaptures your talent completely. I find myself swaying off into a fantasy land, just reading this. Too short - make it longer so I don't have to leave so soon! It's great Pff, really really awesome.
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16 posted 08-16-99 11:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You'd only been with us two days when you posted this lovely piece. I'm afraid when a newbie posts, they try to put as many on the forum as possible the first time out and some of them get overlooked. I wish we could get the word out that we like to look at gems like these one at a time...slowly....to savor the rich beauty and clarity!

Loved this PFF!



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chanelle
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17 posted 08-17-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for chanelle   Email chanelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chanelle

How beautiful...i believe that dreams can come true and fairy tales can happen. I love the way you write...hope you've found your knight my dear...i'm still looking for mine.
DarkChiild
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18 posted 08-17-99 12:48 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

A beautiful poem... I think we all can relate. Hope you find your man.
Terri
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19 posted 08-17-99 01:18 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Loved it! But then again, I've always been a sucker for the knight in armor fantasy...(wink, wink)
Artur Hawkwing
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20 posted 08-17-99 01:20 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

You didn't get that many responses earlier, now that you've brought it back to the surface, you have a million responses! I stand in awe of this poem, the fantasy world you have created - I can almost think I am peering through the wicked witch of Oz's crystal ball plotting some disaster. hehe just kidding... I would never think about ruining your fantasy dreams. Great one, liked it!
caroline
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21 posted 08-17-99 05:29 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Beautiful!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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22 posted 08-17-99 10:17 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much!!! Great job!
Dark Angel
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23 posted 08-21-99 06:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh PFF this soooo beautiful, well done
RainbowGirl
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24 posted 08-21-99 06:32 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Great pillow thoughts..:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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