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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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0 posted 07-27-99 12:32 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

What's the greatest
wonder in your life,
the thing
you treasure
the most?
Could it be
your lover
or your wife,
that you raise
a glass to toast?

I knew I loved her
when we first met,
such a shy
and gentle thing.
My wife knew
and did not get upset,
over her
my latest fling.

Her mother watched
with a careful eye,
as I held her
in my arms.
Her love
I accepted with a sigh,
she bewitched me
with her charms.

She smiles at me
with sparkling eyes,
each time I
whisper her name.
I promised her
there would be
no lies,
if she vowed
to me the same.

With her
my life
was turned
upside down,
and sent spinning
in a whirl.
I want you to
know this
before you frown,
I speak
of my baby girl.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


1 posted 07-27-99 12:35 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I think this is the most precious piece you have ever written. The bond between father and daughter is absolutely beautiful! You've captured the beauty of it very well.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Gentle Soul
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since 07-12-99
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Vinton,Ohio USA


2 posted 07-27-99 12:37 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thats so sweet!!! *hugs* I love it brother.. *giggles*

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Gėnt£ė¤§°ū£

elvira
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since 07-06-99
Posts 985
California


3 posted 07-27-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i am duly impressed...didn't know you had such sweetness in you

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~
Alwye
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In the space between moments


4 posted 07-27-99 03:13 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

extremely sweet....a lovely piece, Dream.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

azblond
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The Steamy Desert


5 posted 07-27-99 03:37 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Dream...forget all the times I said that "this is my fav"...THIS touched my heart, warmed my soul, and made me love you more than ever before. WellDone!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

leelew
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since 07-10-99
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6 posted 07-27-99 09:11 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

Awwww!!! You have such a wonderful gentle side.I loved this!!
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-27-99 03:05 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Bit unsure about posting this and the companion story, vulnerability isn't my favorite thing.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


8 posted 07-27-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A Wonderful, Wonderful piece!! And what a great tribute to the love of a father. Your daughter is lucky!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Lost Dreamer
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Normal, Illinois


9 posted 07-27-99 07:46 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

You have such a versatile talent. You can go from writing dark and scarey, to writing about love in so many special ways. I admire your brilliant abilities.
DreamEvil
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10 posted 07-27-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Kelly
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11 posted 07-28-99 04:13 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Great and sweet.
Kelly
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12 posted 07-28-99 04:15 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Great and sweet.
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