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Magic Bunny
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 18


0 posted 1999-07-26 11:44 PM


As I lay on my feather bed,
memories of my past swarm in my head.
I watch the shadows taking shapes,
a play of my life by the velvet drapes.

A baby girl with tears in her eyes,
a loving mother calms her cries.
A handsome father with a smile on his face,
holds his daughter close in a caring embrace.

A naughty young child by the cookie jar,
reaches for yum-yums but finds them too far.
Her mommy taps her foot in frustration,
dissapointed with her child's temptation.
The young girls says uh-oh and hides under the rug,
Her mama forgives her and gives her a hug.

A wild teenager partying late,
kissing and hugging her boyfriend and date.
Her parents are worried, tired, and upset,
they told her daughter 9:00, how could she forget?
Their daughter comes home, dizzy and drunk,
mumbling about the school's major hunk.
The teen is grounded for crossing the line,
her parents say o.k. but to listen next time.

Now a grown woman, I look at my life.
All the happiness and all the strife.
These memories go by, oh so fast,
while watching the shadows of my past.


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The Magical Rainbow Bunny

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elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-27 12:17 PM


enjoyed reading your poem...Welcome Magic Bunny

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master
...apart...plain...chat?



Cobra
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58

2 posted 1999-07-27 06:43 PM


Great way of explaining one's reflection on their life. Cool.

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Cammie

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