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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 1999-07-26 06:57 PM


The course breezes
Of winter cross my face
I’m sent back to the last of our summers
The warmth, the friendship, and the love
The pain is no longer there and you are no longer here
As I lean in to kiss you the cold hits again
Everything so sharp and swift
Everything such a reminder
As the brown and gold casket is being lowered in front of me now
Touch me forever, but touch me no longer
I promise this time I will let you go

Forgive me in my time of depression.. I have just lost a friend..

Love,
Lady



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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.



© Copyright 1999 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-07-26 07:04 PM


Ladycat-I am so sorry to hear about your friend. Email me if you feel like talking. And I do like your poem!
Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX
2 posted 1999-07-27 10:41 AM


Thank you Elizabeth and I think that I will be emailing you real soon.. It is good to know that you have friends in the netpoets..

Love,
Lady

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3 posted 1999-08-30 09:43 AM


This poem really moved me, and I thought it would be nice to see it again...I'm a firm believer in making the most of every day, because we don't know when our number is up....live life to the fullest, and love every soul around you, for you may not see them tomorrow ! Make sure they know just how much they mean to you......before they're gone. Cherish everything & everyone! ****blowing kisses

Ladycat, I know you will rise up from this a stronger, and more beautiful individual....thank you for sharing such a personal moment....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



miriam
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4 posted 1999-08-30 01:42 PM


many people tell me that I'm a great comforter. your poem has touched me deeply. my email is available if you need to talk.
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