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Ladycat
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The course breezes
Of winter cross my face
Iím sent back to the last of our summers
The warmth, the friendship, and the love
The pain is no longer there and you are no longer here
As I lean in to kiss you the cold hits again
Everything so sharp and swift
Everything such a reminder
As the brown and gold casket is being lowered in front of me now
Touch me forever, but touch me no longer
I promise this time I will let you go

Forgive me in my time of depression.. I have just lost a friend..

Love,
Lady



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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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1 posted 07-26-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Ladycat-I am so sorry to hear about your friend. Email me if you feel like talking. And I do like your poem!
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2 posted 07-27-99 10:41 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Thank you Elizabeth and I think that I will be emailing you real soon.. It is good to know that you have friends in the netpoets..

Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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3 posted 08-30-99 09:43 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This poem really moved me, and I thought it would be nice to see it again...I'm a firm believer in making the most of every day, because we don't know when our number is up....live life to the fullest, and love every soul around you, for you may not see them tomorrow ! Make sure they know just how much they mean to you......before they're gone. Cherish everything & everyone! ****blowing kisses

Ladycat, I know you will rise up from this a stronger, and more beautiful individual....thank you for sharing such a personal moment....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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4 posted 08-30-99 01:42 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

many people tell me that I'm a great comforter. your poem has touched me deeply. my email is available if you need to talk.
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