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Blue
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since 07-03-99
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0 posted 07-26-99 05:10 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue


you haven't called
I haven't cried
I've kept my head
held up so high

I've been so strong
as days have passed
but yesterday
it was my last

today I found
a letter sent
from you to me
goodbye's intent

written and read
three months ago
I still had hope
would not let go

staring at words
now all I hear
is lies lies lies
away fades fear

replaced by pain
lies lies all lies
fire in my heart
tears in my eyes

so even I
have fine'ly cried
as truth came clear
and my hope died

close eyes, lick lips
tasting the salt
tears of knowledge
it was my fault
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 07-26-99 05:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Nice poem! I think we've all been there once or twice.
Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
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2 posted 07-26-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Nice job, I like the way you expressed yourself.
Blue
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3 posted 07-27-99 01:08 AM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

Thanks. It's nice to know people can relate. I appreciate the feedback.
ChickenLittle
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since 07-28-99
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4 posted 07-28-99 02:40 AM       View Profile for ChickenLittle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ChickenLittle

You are a very talented writer, and whoever you wrote this about must have been horrible to you. I love your poem and you should post more.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 07-28-99 02:48 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very sad....oh, how I've been there...a wonderful job, Blue. I look forward to more of your postings!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Blue
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6 posted 07-28-99 11:30 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

Thanks.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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7 posted 07-29-99 09:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
deannamarie
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8 posted 07-29-99 10:27 AM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

Nice? I like the ones I csn relate to and understand and this is one of them. Good job.
Blue
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9 posted 07-29-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

Thanks again everybody. Maybe I'll even get up the guts to post some more thanks to your responses.
Blue
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10 posted 07-29-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

Thanks again everybody. Maybe I'll even get up the guts to post some more thanks to your responses.
Blue
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11 posted 07-29-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

Thanks again everybody. Maybe I'll even get up the guts to post some more thanks to your responses.
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


12 posted 10-29-2005 01:29 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Nice!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink

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