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its deja vu - honest!

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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 07-26-99 01:27 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

I know I posted my poem twice,
Patience has never been my suit.
I hate waiting for the Internet, but
I know interrupting it is rude.

So if you read either poem,
And from that a comment stems,
A CC to the other post
Is not needed to make me grin.

Just pretend its deja vu,
And its happening all over again.
Or if it really gets to you,
While stamping your foot, say "Men!"
© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Ron
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1 posted 07-26-99 02:47 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

This message makes no sense to me:
No evidence that I can see
Of double postings any where,
of déjà vu's or double dare.

Perhaps you've had too much to drink?
A double view's not rare, I think,
When elbow bends more than it must
(And poets oft' forget to trust).

Of double posts, we don't abide,
So déjà vu's we always hide!
No double sight allowed, you see,
So Zap, delete - just one for thee!

LngJhnAg
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2 posted 07-26-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Ron!

Great comeback - I've enjoyed your postings. It is a pleasure posting here. Thanks for cleaning up my double post. Kinda embarrassin', yanno?
elvira
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since 07-06-99
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3 posted 07-26-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

a two-for-one chuckle...thanks LngJhn and Ron

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master
...apart...plain...chat?


 
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