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poetFemmeFatale
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In my dreams - my heart's a castle
many rooms, but no one's there...
One small tide could wash away
All my secrets hidden there.

If you would only come inside
To dwell within my soul...
My empty rooms would be no more
Please love me - make me whole.


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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1 posted 07-26-99 06:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It's short, but it sure says a lot!
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Very sweet, poetFemmeFatale. One thing I've learnt is to create a room for yourself - we're never alone when we care for ourselves. Here's my favourite quote: 'To love oneself is the beginning of a lifelong romance' Oscar Wilde.
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Yes, this indeed says a lot...so very beautiful. I'm glad I dug it up!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

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Yes, a beautiful work that speaks volumes..!!

Severn, I agree, loving thyself is the first step to loving others..it took me a long while to figure that one out...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


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Not a single wasted word...nicely done
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Poet- I am thankful for who ever brought this up to the top, like much of our work this was excellent.
blueloon

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To give yourself keeps yourself still,
And you must live, drawn by your own sweet skill.
-shakespeare
And so of you, beauteous and lovely youth,
When that shall vade, by verse distills your truth.
-shakespeare
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7 posted 08-20-99 10:29 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

What longing... I like!!!
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