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Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 1999-07-26 02:43 AM


I'll tell you now: this is a bit "different"

The Slug.

I stood on a slug last night
a big
fat
juicy slug
that burst
with a POP!
and squished through my toes

oh how
how I wish
I'd worn my slippers!

© Copyright 1999 Colin Ramage - All Rights Reserved
Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669
Michigan, US
1 posted 1999-07-26 02:49 AM


Glad to see you posting more, Eric. But, uh, that was not the image I was looking to take to bed tonight...
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-26 02:50 AM


YIKES!!!...the worst part is, i can relate, i have done that once in my life, what a disgusting feeling!!!

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

IsabelleSkye
Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

3 posted 1999-07-26 09:21 AM


Darling...next time CHOP 'IM WITH SCISSORS!!!!! That's what I do to get rid of em, not smush em with my bare feet LOL..I loved this, it's nice to see a lighter side of you. I miss that.
Izzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

Delores Hall
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
4 posted 1999-07-26 10:30 AM


Sorry but that is disgusting.
Crystal
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.
5 posted 1999-07-26 12:01 PM


All I can say is ewe.
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 1999-08-30 10:22 AM


Oh eeegads!! Izzy? You chop 'em with your scissors? Remind me to never borrow your scissors!!! Where have your scissors been???? LOL This reminds me, dear Eric, of something not quite so SICK, but along the same line, as a young girl at McDonalds one day after Sunday school....I accidently stepped on a package of ketchup out in the playland....it shot all the way up inside my skirt, and didn't stop till it got to my drawers!!! I had ketchup all the way up between my legs!! To this day, when I see one of those darn little packages on the ground, I see it as a BOMB!! I go out of my way to walk AROUND it, like it's a snake!!! I'm paranoid, and probably need counseling.....(sigh) This lovely poem of yours has certainly made me want to stay inside!! Geee thanks. Back to the top for others to ENJOY!! ha

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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