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The Slug

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Colin
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since 06-05-99
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0 posted 07-26-99 02:43 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Colin

I'll tell you now: this is a bit "different"

The Slug.

I stood on a slug last night
a big
fat
juicy slug
that burst
with a POP!
and squished through my toes

oh how
how I wish
I'd worn my slippers!
© Copyright 1999 Colin Ramage - All Rights Reserved
Ron
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1 posted 07-26-99 02:49 AM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

Glad to see you posting more, Eric. But, uh, that was not the image I was looking to take to bed tonight...
elvira
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since 07-06-99
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2 posted 07-26-99 02:50 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

YIKES!!!...the worst part is, i can relate, i have done that once in my life, what a disgusting feeling!!!

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~
IsabelleSkye
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3 posted 07-26-99 09:21 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Darling...next time CHOP 'IM WITH SCISSORS!!!!! That's what I do to get rid of em, not smush em with my bare feet LOL..I loved this, it's nice to see a lighter side of you. I miss that.
Izzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau
Delores Hall
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4 posted 07-26-99 10:30 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Sorry but that is disgusting.
Crystal
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since 07-24-99
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5 posted 07-26-99 12:01 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

All I can say is ewe.
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 08-30-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh eeegads!! Izzy? You chop 'em with your scissors? Remind me to never borrow your scissors!!! Where have your scissors been???? LOL This reminds me, dear Eric, of something not quite so SICK, but along the same line, as a young girl at McDonalds one day after Sunday school....I accidently stepped on a package of ketchup out in the playland....it shot all the way up inside my skirt, and didn't stop till it got to my drawers!!! I had ketchup all the way up between my legs!! To this day, when I see one of those darn little packages on the ground, I see it as a BOMB!! I go out of my way to walk AROUND it, like it's a snake!!! I'm paranoid, and probably need counseling.....(sigh) This lovely poem of yours has certainly made me want to stay inside!! Geee thanks. Back to the top for others to ENJOY!! ha

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


 
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